Monday, 19 March 2012

beauty

Beauty :
-.You can achieve beauty if you earn it or take care of it . Beauty comes inside of you . You can have your own beauty in different ways such as believing ,being loyal , being kind etc.  You could go on about how to achieve your own beauty.  Beauty can be a beautiful thing.  It can bring happiness to your self.   Some people think there beautiful and better then others therfore they start to hate and bring negative thoughts to people . I find that some people can be mean with beauty. It  isn't everything but in some cases it is.  Beauty comes natural to people . And if your not beautiful people can be cruel.  Beauty isn't just  looks, its more then what people think it is. Over the years people are changing their looks with plastic surgery, trying to be beautiful and changing their appearance.  But really you will always be the same person with the same beauty you have always had inside and outside.  Its not all about outer appearance beauty  and someday everyone will come together and realize it.  You are who you are, with the beauty with in yourself.
-."Outer beauty is only skin deep. If you go after someone just because she's beautiful but don't have anything to talk about, it's going to get boring fast. You want to look beyond the surface and see if you can have fun or if you have anything in common with this person"- Amanda Peet 

- Amanda is saying that being Beautiful isn't everything its just something on the side. She says that if you look deep into someone you can see there true colors either there pretty or not you might have something in common with there personality inside instead of there looks. Most people don't look "skin deep" into each other because they just judge of how they look right away. Also Amanda is right when she says most the time it will get boring fast if you don't look skin deep . Beauty is inside of you and everyone will soon see it.-If you achieve beauty you might have pros and cons about beauty. It might be harder to find something you love because you are losing who you want to be and becoming what the world wants .But if you come "skin deep" beauty then you might still be beautiful but still have your personality inside of you and who you are inside of you. You will love your self for who you are and not care about if people judge you for your beauty or how you look because to you it isn't all about that.
-"A beauty is a woman you notice; a charmer is one who notices you."-anonymous 

Monday, 5 March 2012

Charcter Traits

1.Friendly  "Nia's parents always treated me good and trusted me . ( personal )
2.Loving " she just smiles , though , unless you try to put her down , then she screams like it's the end of the world."( personal )
3.Fustratded "Cause i had to give Feather a bath it made everything late. i'd already been called into the guidance counselor's office twice" (phyical )
Bobby's life at this point isn't what he expected. Bobby's life is having some  ups and downs and Nia isn’t helping him out at all. Bobby is feeling Physical and Personal moods about Feather and his life . Feather is keeping him up all night with crying so he either has to change her or feed her or look after her. He is missing school grades going down or he is either  late for school or doesn't even go. Bobby isn't hanging out with his friend's all the time like he use to . He is really missing out with his friends. His friends growing up staying in school being kids and Bobby is staying at home with feather. Bobby is missing the time he use to spend with his friends and it is really effecting him. At one point J.L called him to come play basketball  and Bobby had feather and she was sleeping  and he just ran out of the house and forgot about feather .Bobby has the whole world on his shoulders and  he is trying to take care of feather and juggling school and is trying not to fail and be the best. Bobby is  trying his best to go through this and is getting his act together and is going to rise Feather the right way and be a father.

Friday, 2 March 2012

Supense or pathos

"How he'd gotten the keys to nelson's room .It's never  good to know too much about J.L has in the back of his head."
In this quote from the book is a flash back to before feather was born and how Bobby was in school and knew that the baby was coming and he still acted out in school. So i had picked this as a suspenseful moment in the book because it has a lot of moods in it such as is Bobby is ready for Nia to have a baby. Therefore this is a suspenseful moment and  it makes a bunch of  flash backs for if  Bobby is having a curious thoughts about Nia having feather because he is still a kid in school and still wants to do what kids to best and that's fool around . Bobby is Frustrated because he doesn’t know what to do . Bobby gets taken out of class because Nia had to go to the hospital or problems with feather  Bobby's flash back turns out to be good because in the ends Bobby is happy that Nia had Feather and that he is a loving dad that is going through ups and downs but is glad feather is born. This flash back was taken place at Bobbys school with his friends and turned into him leaving to go to the hospital for Nia.