Rotten boards covered the broken window in this lonely house just allowing only a small piece of moonlight to pass through. The light pushed into the dark room, placing on the floor directly in front of a crying and terrified little girl. She was taped with rope to a rock hard wooden chair, choked with a cloth that tasted of sweat. Her once perfectly golden blonde hair now hung about her face but her black-blue dress was still nice neat. A tall figure stepped into the light, a tall man dressed in a black tuxedo. A dark-colored towel hung loosely over the man’s head, he looked to be gaunt with ugly figures. The little girl was scared as the man brushed his fingertips through her tears.Then he spoke and the voice was the sound of creeping broken recorder
"shhl little one girl don’t be afraid you will go home but first there is a lesson that must be learned "The girl was terrified was the smell of his stinky breathe came closer.” you are a pretty princess that is what they called you when you won the beauty pageant. At the age 10 you have learned that being pretty is the most important thing in the world. your mother has taught you this because it is the most important thing to her she has allowed you to become brat that the world reloves around you." The man in the tux reached up to her face and grabbed it and said True Beauty comes from inside a pretty face is just bonus for people. But you will never understand that will you ? said the man. He reached in his back pocket and brought out a small pocket knife lightly touches the girls forehead. She cried out again. The man got closer and said when you leave here you will no longer be a pretty bratty princess you will thank me one day but for no you will have to find the true beauty inside of you if you fail i will find you. Now go yells the man you lesson begins now.
Revised
The light pushed into the dark room, placing on the floor directly in front of a crying and terrified little girl. She was taped with rope to a rock hard wooden chair. A tall figure stepped into the light, a tall man dressed in a black tuxedo. The little girl was scared as the man brushed his fingertips through her tears. "shh little one girl don’t be afraid you will go home but first there is a lesson that must be learned The girl was terrified was the smell of his stinky breathe came closer. You are a pretty princess that is what they called you when you won the beauty pageant. Your mother has taught you this because it is the most important thing to her she has allowed you to become brat that the world reloves around you." The man in the tux reached up and said True Beauty comes from inside a pretty face is just bonus for people. But you will never understand that will you ? . The man got closer and said when you leave here you will no longer be a pretty bratty princess you will thank me one day but for no you will have to find the true beauty inside of you if you fail i will find you. Now go yells the man you lesson begins now.
Revised again
The light pushed into the dark room crying and terrified little girl. She was taped with rope to a rock hard wooden chair. A tall man dressed in a black tuxedo walked in. "shh little girl don’t be afraid you will go home but first there is a lesson that must be learned .Your mother has taught you this because it is the most important thing to her she has allowed you to become the brat that thinks the world reloves around her." The man reached up and said True Beauty comes from inside a pretty face is just bonus for people, But you will never understand that will you ? . You leave here you will no longer be a pretty bratty princess you will thank me one day but for now you will have to find the true beauty inside of you if you fail i will find you. Now go yells the man you lesson begins now.
Reflection:
This relates to my quote "Beauty is only skin deep. If you go after someone just because she's beautiful but don't have anything to talk about, it's going to get boring fast. You want to look beyond the surface and see if you can have fun or if you have anything in common with this person"- Amanda Peet
The little girl thought she would never be in the position she is in right now. Could die or possible get injured by the man in the black tux. The man in the black tux see's this beauty in the little girl and doesn't like it because she is a snotty brat that only thinks of her self. But now the man makes a bet with her and makes her really think if she try's to go beyond her beauty and figure out whats inside of her maybe she will have better qualities then just beauty.
